by Otazel
Never found a lady who would allow anal, thank you for enforcing my fantasy! A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
and hot coupling! Loved it...they both got what they wanted, and vivid word painting of them getting it!
My second reading, after quite a while...would change to 4 stars to 5 if I could.
Pacing, steamy detail, back-and-forth play of control between them, even the just-right amount of roughness - it all comes together. Great one!
I really enjoyed this story...it was VERY hot. However, may I suggest that you go easy on the exclamation points? They were very overused and totally detracted from the times when things really were exciting!
I Like So Much Using The Back Door For Great Fun !Feye@myway.com
Yes the 'reality' of the situation - based in the UK and all the dirty talk. Now combine that with some pissing or group sex and one hell of a story. Overall exxxcellent
As a writer of erotica myself I thought that this story was stunning. Normally I would 'change' several aspects of a story that I read, but in case not one word can be changed - absolutely fantastic (and very sexy!)
This story is the type of thing I saw more of here. A first time story told in good prose and style. It includes so much about the feel of things and dirty talk. Yummy! Write some more soon.