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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Doorman error

The doorman should have said "the trunk" instead of "the boot" to keep with the cab driver's speech. Our hero of course would not know "the trunk" was not referencing "his trunk" which of course he did not bring.

Oh, and I cannot believe that you are bringing a married wizard to explore new worlds; especially in the cities you are hinting at being NY and Miami. I would love to see a little more Captain Kirk vs. Captain Picard if you get my logic.

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