All Comments on 'Vacation at the Beach'

I thought it was a well written tale - needs more details and a second part. Easy to read and enjoy. Fun.

Brave girl Karen, it sounded like you had a lovely stroll on the beach. This being your first of many more nights, you do remember he has a roommate.

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That was a great tale...almost like a 'first time's story. Would like to read more with this character.

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