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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A Simple English Lesson (courtiously intended)

anytime you start a sentence with "If", it requires a comma after that opening phrase. If you recruit a knowledgable editor, he/she will help you repair some of these sort of errors in your writing, and it will improve the reading pleasure of your fans!

shatterstrapshatterstrapover 1 year ago

This is a fun start!

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