All Comments on 'Vacation Planning'

It's hard to capture the mood of anxiety and fear in an incest lust story. Perfect tone throughout. Credible and hot.

After reading some of your other stories, I find that this one is also enjoyable. Thanks for the web site as well. Very good and hot. WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOU IN A FULL POSE FOR YOUR PICTURE.WILLAMAN

I liked your premise! It was a good story. I wish there were more details and descriptions. But on the whole I did enjoy it.

Thanks for writing

sexmate

Oh my fucking god!! This was amazing, unbelievable I usually don?t like brother/sister very much but you have made me a believer this could very well be one of if not my most favorite stories!

Richie

OMG... more, ASAP

Thank you for writing one of the hottest brother/sister stories around. It is really imaginative and well written. Thank you also for bothering with the spelling and grammar, many basically good stories are spoiled by bad technique.

I am looking forward to reading some of your other submissions and hope they come across as well!

You handled the beginning of an incestuous relationship the best of any story I have read, including my own. It would never be as smooth as we usually write it. And I didn't notice any of the grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors that detract from most of these stories. I, too, thought you could have included a little more sexual detail without getting "dirty", but it was still sexy and nice to read. I enjoyed it, and from the ending I assume that you plan a sequel. I hope so.

JRM

Damn - you left me with my dick in my hand! Please continue - the proposed vacation sounds like a great fuckfest - perhaps Mom & Dad will join in!

I can only echo what the other readers have said about how real this story seems. I think you did a wonderful job, Marcia, of giving the characters a genuinely sincere appeal.

Thanks for a most delightful story.

No young female virgin would handle that

Was hard to follow got bored quick

hated it you made the guy out to be a real asshole it was so bad i couldn't even finish the first page and the parents were just as bad as the son no parent is going to stand by and say nothing when the daughter tells them the brother is undoing her bra and touching her they would ground him or send him to military school keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic

And it certainly did have a ring of truth about it. Thanks for good story.

. . . what there was of it. The author did a great job of building up the tension between the brother and sister and having them react in a believable way. However, more chapters are needed in order for the story to feel complete.

try leaving an honest comment she is not going to let you screw her if you give her a rave review give honest comments so she can improve

this was way to unrealistic no girl is going to put up with that kind of treatment she would avoid him at all costs and the parents would never allow it in the first place he would be grounded or sent to military school keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic and believable please this is not the fantacy area

Every time the story started to get good, you completely cut it off with "* * *"

And I have to admit at the end of the story I was pretty annoyed by it, and disappointed.

wait... what? how is the couple related again? oh crap, idk.

Most realistic story I've ever read. I could literally imagine something like this happening and the way you portrayed both of their characters and personality just made it seem even more natural. Nice piece.

rubbish