All Comments on 'Vacation with My Aunty Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You tried

It seems obvious that English isn't your language. I won't complain about the grammar or sentence structure, your proofreader SHOULD have helped you on that.

The story, though, was kind of goofy, and wholly unbelievable, from the dialog to the events that you put forward.

Keep trying -

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

What the fuck was this shit?

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 6 years ago
Are you even old enough to be READING this? Let alone WRITING shit like this.

I have to say, you come off as a bit "unexperienced".

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Carry on Cumming!

You are from India, aren't you?

Is it common to be naked in front of your elders in India? What about housemaids? Do you guys walk around naked in front of them too?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
expect to read the next chapter

the story is good,hope to know how circumcision ceremony got take palce.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
interesting

I look forward to reading about your circumcision ceremony and what fun the women who attended had.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMG! Can I ve him?

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