All Comments on 'Valentine's Babies'

This is a very well written story with an interesting plot, fine characterization, and beautifully depicted lovemaking. Keep up the excellent work.

Liked your characters...their passion...the build up...Thanks!

This is a really nicely done Valentine's Day romance. The build up to the sex was handled deftly and it heightened the sensuality when the scene eventually arrived. Finally, the sex itself was very erotic, romantic, and sensual. Really, really good story!

The dialogue was a little disconnected and overdone. Good plot, though.

It is a good story, with a good base plot. I love when there's a twist and it's a cool twist. There are indeed some grammar/word usage issues, but not many like alot of the writers on here.

If perhaps a bit cloying.

My attitude, much like your protagonist's previous posture,

stems from being told , on Valentine's day in 1980,

by a bored and impatient pathologist

That i had 3 kinds of testicular cancer,

and that it had probably spread.

It had.