All Comments on 'Valentines Day Invasion'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice storyline

I am a big fan of all your work. I can see this storyline developing nicely. Have a great day! -AV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Invasion of the Body Snatchers

That was the first thing I thought of

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hey, that's pretty good!

This was actually a good story. You have got to look out for some spelling mistakes though. Other than that, this story was very well done. A thumbs up to you πŸ‘πŸπŸŒ±

TurtleHermitTurtleHermitover 1 year ago

This was great! Mild spelling errors aside, this would make a great mini series! Will there be more of this story?

maestro84maestro84over 1 year agoAuthor

When I first wrote it, I had intended a series but never really got back to it. No plans at the moment but you never know.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...