All Comments on 'Valentine's Day: The Abduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A very good love story. He loved his wife and

found her friend actually loved and wished to be a part of them. It was a wonderful way for a man to grow up and two women to realize what life is really about.

revengerrevengerabout 17 years ago
This is a storie??????

sorry, i have to promise not to read your sick mind stories again

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
novel story idea, and very sexy

One of the more original efforts I've seen here!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Loved it

What a fun read. Thanks.

Spice1959Spice1959over 15 years ago
About Time

Makes a change to read something with with an original premise, rather than the same old re-hashed stories

clark3001clark3001about 15 years ago
Special and amazing

Amazing due to the way consent way obtained to nin consent sex and special because the story says something - "be a better man" & "try harder" for happiness in life.

dangerouslydeaddangerouslydeadabout 14 years ago
What an imagination

Good Imagination. Overall nice people who realize how foolish they have been. What more can you ask for? Good Job!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

nice imagination and narration......the ending could have been better and less predictable.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
cute and funny

liked it

Dick88Dick88almost 8 years ago
This could use a sequeal.

White Day, where the girl's abduct him...maybe.

But I hope Maria is sucking him off daily after this.

redlion75redlion75over 6 years ago
How

Did he build the room and hide it from his wife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Train wreck

This story is so fucking absurd... but like a train wreck you can’t look away.

How does the same guy who guzzles beer and cums in his sweat pants design a pretend alien craft of such sophisticated design and technology... wtf. The timing for the vibrator torture alone would take a NASA scientist but this disgruntled hubby, this recliner riding rapist knocks it off in days... too funny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Relax!

It is JUST a fantasy! Just enjoy the premise. It was sexy, the anal was preverse (great!), the other sex, the epiphany or realization of caring at the end. I laughed a little. Thank you,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Epic stupidity

Go to jail. Go directly to jail. Do not pass GO. Do years in prison. UGH!

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