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All Comments on 'Valentines Gifts'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Proof-reading?

A reasonable story, spoilt by poor spelling and a sudden change from third to first person narrative..... Maybe the author should get his writing proof-read before submission.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful Gift

Sounds like a great gift. Would have loved to take part. The story brings to mind nice pictures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

LERN HOW TO SPELL

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