by Polyacrylate
I liked this story. It demonstrates your ability to convey those mixed up feelings of our twenties I can easily relate to. Thank you.
Characters were real, conversation wasn’t wooden. I liked the was you transitioned from a problem in a relationship to a past experience, and then used that to lead into a potential for romantic resolution.
I would have liked this a little longer once back in the present but maybe that’s for another story. . . Over all a 4.5 *.
Look forward to reading more from you, and thank you for the story 🙂