All Comments on 'Valerie Song: Drama Bomb Part 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Fun and lighthearted story. Well written and with an overarching plot, that connects the individual scenes nicely.

Loved the addition of even more fetishes like Roxie, that I did not know existed and were appealing to me until this storypart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I wanted her to fuck Roxie

I’ve said it all in the title really. I get what you were going for teasing it, but she behaved so enticingly that I was fucking gagging to see her actually get that monster cock. I also really loved how casual it was. My only negative point is I became confused when everyone was just yelling names near the end, couldn’t follow at all. Otherwise great and looking forward to the next part.

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