All Comments on 'Valerie?s Payment'

by poisoned_monkey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Nice touch....

Nothing quite like a woman struggling and then loving it...

GeorgeTaskerGeorgeTaskerover 20 years ago
Slurp

Nice blowjob, and nice twist at the end

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice Twist

Very good work I really liked the ending never saw it comming.

Thanks.

Patrick_B76Patrick_B76about 17 years ago
nice story

Very nice story, one of the best I have read here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hmmm

I'd love to go cross country with you. If you get tired of Valerie, I'd love to take her place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Well done

This could have been a pedestrian story, common theme. However, the twist you gave it, at the end, made it different, a little special. Thanks for the fun.

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