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Click hereShortly after the final word had left my mouth twin beams of blue light struck me. My legs gave out and I pitched forward into the sand as the security operatives stunned me.
- COMMENTS
GrantLeeStoneover 6 years agoI enjoyed the detail in the fight.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
kitty_siamover 6 years agoAuthorDear Anonymous,
This is the way I write, if you do not like it... stop reading my stories. Perhaps you would enjoy something else... like a comic book with lots of pictures?
Anonymous complaints suck,
~ Kitty ~
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe fight scene was nice but too detailed
The rest was just a lot of inderect exposition that doesnt innvolve me as a reader
EclecticReaderover 6 years agoI totally enjoy your work. It is detailed and realistic. The references to current day culture are perfection
Thanks for sharing your imagination and story telling skill.
Anonymousover 6 years agoGreat start. I will be looking for more of this story. Keep it up. The USAF Brat is a great addition.
