by kitty_siam
Great start. I will be looking for more of this story. Keep it up. The USAF Brat is a great addition.
I totally enjoy your work. It is detailed and realistic. The references to current day culture are perfection
Thanks for sharing your imagination and story telling skill.
The fight scene was nice but too detailed
The rest was just a lot of inderect exposition that doesnt innvolve me as a reader
Dear Anonymous,
This is the way I write, if you do not like it... stop reading my stories. Perhaps you would enjoy something else... like a comic book with lots of pictures?
Anonymous complaints suck,
~ Kitty ~
I enjoyed the detail in the fight.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.