All Comments on 'Vampire Dreams: Smoke'

what interesting elements for a vampire to have. Well vampires having elements( for lack of a better description) is whole new thing to read. It will be interesting to see if you follow this up w/another chapter about what her powers bring to their relationship. And w/them both being the last of their kinds does that mean someone will be out to get them?

You have so many places you can take this story. I look forward to finding out where you go next.

Wish the chapters could be a tad longer though. Keep up the good work.

Good start, can't wait for more...