All Comments on 'Vampire Seduction Ch. 04'

Welcome back!!! Pleasee post more soon!!! I really really enjoy this series as well as all the other stories u've written. Good job! Hopefully we'll c another chapter soon :-)

Missed your excellent stories! You have lost none of your skill, please write more soon!

Now we'll discover what set her apart to become the object of his intention. About time that Katarina comes into her own.

I must admit I was surprised to see a new chapter after all this time, but I'm hoping this means you plan to continue this wonderful story!!!!

I have just discovered this story and I think its great I love your style of writing I hope this means that there are more chapters to come soon thanks

I am so happy that you are back, I hope this signifies the beginning of your return to writing. Please finish off your other stories, we've missed you!!

would love to read more!! be looking for it.

I really enjoyed this story and I'm so glad your writing again. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

this series is amazing!

keep writing!

I am so happy you are writing your story, again, Wishful!! I keep your stories on a list and I check back periodically to see if you've added any new chapters. This story is fantastic and please don't make us wait for anymore new chapters. Thanks!! :)

Thank you so much for adding another chapter, I thought that you had given up on this story :) I absolutely love it :)!!!!!

OMG!!!! at last!!! this is an amazing piece of work. i could not wait for the next one. love the whole theme. this is my "fairy tale" story.

MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE....PRETTY PLEASE!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter

Your erotica is intense, but I would love to know more of the story as well. Please continue this story!

If you don't write some more chapters.

I absolutely love this story line. Please please keep them coming. Seriously my favorite of any erotica I've read in my lifetime. This could be a book... So many places to take it. LOVE it.

This storyline is amazing and the writing intense, but there is one problem.

You need to keep writing!!!!!!!!! Kate needs to learn more about her powers and the vampire world! Oh please write more!!!!!!

nicccee cant wait for the next chapter!!

continue with this story--you're an interesting writer.

you are leaving all of us hanging! we NEED you to finish this story. pretty pretty please?

ohhhhh please write more!!!! pllllleeeaaasssseee!!!!!!???!!!!

There is only 1 problem with this story....it doesnt have enough i want more more more...... :)

You use Katalina in earlier chapters but call her Katarina in this one. You might want to fix that in future installments. Other than that, I hope you do continue.

Well obviously Katarina was a typo it happens..

Anywho, this chapter started to bore me, no wait' Katarina started to bore me. Her attitube pisses me off, its not like she has anything to go back to and her life was a box of roses with a father who is a disgusting pig and a job she's not happy with. She's a witch for christ sake, not a normal human. Pfft she just pisses me off with the Free me attitude my life was so much better before you came into it .. Pfft ..

well, I'm glad you continued this series. I shouldn't have had to wait years for this installment though. BB

please continue a little faster....

I'm at the edge of my seat. This story is so fascinating. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm so happy you decided to return to this series. I'd be delighted if you continued with it to the size of your Innocent Pawn series or even more!

Thank you for continuing. Cant wait for more :)

You are AMAZING, I love your stories!! I'm dying for more :)

This series has me in a spell, you MUST write more of it!!!

I enjoyed this series.

it was sooooooooooo good need more.

I loved it can't wait for more!

Good gods, this is one of the best series I've read on literotica. Please, please, PLEASE continue this series!! =)

oh my freakin word..............dis is d best series i hav ever read on literotica...............plz do continue i cant wait!!!

Will there ever be more?! This is sub an amazing story!!! Plz keep it going PLEASEEEEE

This and all your other stories captured me not to mentioned caused me to over sleep since I stayed up reading. Back to my point, I find myself coming back to this story wishing against hope that there would be a new chapter. I have to know what happens next!!!! Please take pity on me and post soon!!!

Please do NOT keep us in suspense any longer! Write, woman, write! :)

Please write more...can't wait to read whats going to happen next...

I'm glad another chapter was added. But I don't think I can wait three more years for another teasing chapter. It's mean to tantalize us, drop a cliffhanger, and then not continue. I need more sexy vampire, especially because this story is thankfully lacking in the dreadful teenage angst so prevalent in most contemporary vamp-tales. So please, please continue (and finish?) this awesome story.

I love your writing style. Especially the sex scenes. Beautifully done. Please don't stop!

SEXY!!

LOVE UR STORIES!

MORE PLEASE!!!

Those flames must have jumped to my laptop ...great great writing !

More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!!

Please please don't desert this story!!!! So good!!!!

Please continue with this story it is so so so good and so hot!!!!!!

I want more

Well another super story joins the graveyard of unfinished stories on here...such a waste,,,since its been 2 years i really doubt that an ending is in the works,,,,i enjoyed what there was,,,but a waste of time reading it,,,,left hanging....

Please!

I agree with you hole heartedly another great story finished b4 its time....... im gwttin annoyed with writers who intrigued me with their writing and leave a story that has gathered a fanbase........ a story that has alot of promise.... i urks me to no end....

it is really too bad it isn't finished

is it finished on another site?

for "unfinished" stories...have them remain in the unfinished category until they are complete and then move them to the other categories. That would save a lot of frustration for readers. So much for this one with no end provided...pathetic.

I agree with anonymous, who stated literotica need a category for unfinished stories, more importantly it should be ratings specific, it was intriguing, lots of passionate couplings, a little mystery, the hint of betrayal and powerful magic and of course unfinished as usual....I'm wondering if to continue reading the story that lead me to this author it might be incomplete too....

Xoxo

Ana

Gave it 2 stars for being so frustratingly unfinished. It would have been great to see Kate understand and control her powers. Maybe meet the "mistress " who I think was her mother. Would have made a great story. Would have received 5 stars and deserved much more if you attempted to finish it. Sadly alot of stories end up this way.

I loved this story but I want more. Does she learn to control her powers? Do they battle with Mirabelle and Nicholas? Does she come to love Luc? All in all well written but we are left hanging with so many unanswered questions. More please!

You are such a talented writer but your stories are frustratingly unfinished.

You have fans! You have people that WANT to read what you write and yet you take years to update - it's ridiculous. Your writing is amazing but it's be great if u could update more frequently.

please finish this...your writing is amazing, the story quite captivating and the romance "wettening" ;)

Okay. Friggin great. Wonder if the TV still works. Friggin great.

Oh man. Or woman. Or both. Dead people. Yep. Defintely dead people. Undead ones as well, not unfinished undead people though. And beer. No, rather rum. Yes, dark rum.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Ps your arse is missed over here.

This is wonderful! Please write more!

i neeed moooooooooooore of this story! It's so GOOOD. This is got so much amazing potentiaaaalllll,

I could have continued to read this story til the end of eternity, and it still would've been over too soon. Let me know when your work hits Kindle!

Pretty please moooore. Don't let us hanging

More please ?

This was a 5 star story. Loved it.

What an amazing series, please write more!

This is truly amazing, my god, can't wait to read more

Luc is an incredibly hot vampire. I would happily let him bite me!

Good story. Great writing.

Oh, my, my, my...I just discovered you as a favorite author of one of my favorite authors. It is a most unpleasant surprise that comments years old have been left requesting more. I add mine now.

More pls

I just found this story and i hope to see more of it. Im very much enjoying it.