All Comments on 'Vampires Desire Bk. 01: Vampire's Pet Ch. 03'

Too many grammar and spelling issues detracted from a nice work

Thank you, I do apologize. I found too many parts to focus on in this piece and I was trying edit. Too many working parts in the chapter and a long night of editing after writing, rewriting, re editing, and then more proof reading, followed by rewriting, then one last editing lead to some poor writing on this chapter. I am thinking about requesting an editor so I am not doing so much work, but I am too afraid that it would be changed to the point that it won't even be my words again.

My authors always have final say over their words. I return their work with my suggestions; they choose which to accept from minimal proofreading to extensive rewrites. The author is in control & makes the final decisions. You need somebody, though, to catch those minor bobbles sneaking in.