All Comments on 'Vampires Don't Sparkle Ch. 18'

Great start realy took me by surprise

I loved the start of the story but I got confused by it too as it was such a jump from the last chapter!! Keep writing xx

You did keep it to one page but was somewhat lean in content

- Emily and Ben play a bit and have sex

- Tiff wake up

And that's all.. where is the progress?

I would have been willing to wait longer for a more substantial content.

3 of 5.

I need my fix. I'm shaking from withdrawal ova here! I'm completely addicted.

great story so far but another longer chapter would be great.

Hi Maestro84

When will we see the next chapters, we've been waiting quite a while now.

Looking forward to the next chapters

how long before you submit chapter 19, and what about Fairy summoning chapter 21?