All Comments on 'Vanessa Ch. 01'

by arinbjorn

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madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
A Good First Submission

This is a rather unique approach to a story. Like many stories it does stretch credulity to the limit, but it is enjoyable and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
KEEP IT

KEEP IT UP I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY

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