by Falcon4451
The tension is maintained well. I can relate, being that innocent girl waiting to be taken. Very erotic!
The build-up was steady, not too slow not too fast, the anticipation of the sexual acts allowed to be arousing within themselves. i very much enjoyed this story! thank you for sharing it with us.
I loved this - nicely paced, well written, and completely believable. Thank you for a fantastic read.
In some ways, it is an idealized dream for a dominant, yet I have taken vanilla women and, with just a few ratchets of the handcuffs, brought her to the other side of the flavor counter. Thank you for a very good story!
Yes, this is one of the best stories i have read at Literotica.... The build up is tremendous... I felt like I was there as the heroine surrenders to her destiny!
This is a very moving story of sweet innocent submission and sexual awakening!
I love this story which explores a young woman's submissive awakening at the hands of a very caring master....
This is a beautiful story that describes a young woman's awakenng on a date....!!!!!