All Comments on 'Vanishing Act'

It would be kind of interesting to see a story about a hypnotist who's actually lost control—not in a mental "mind control" sense, but in an addiction sense. Someone whose entire life crumbles around them while they struggle to manage a huge number of consorts. Basically, a hypnotist who's not actually that competent. Be a neat "careful what you wish for" story.

I say this because I actually thought it was where you were going originally. It is interesting to see a hypnotist who's clearly not making the "wisest" choices. Some good characters here, and the premise is really clever.

I like this story, though the sex scene felt weirdly rushed. But it's not always about the sex with your stories, and that's what makes them so interesting.

Curiosity gets the best of us all sometimes. Quite a story, thanks for sharing it with us.

One of your best in a while!