by kinbote
Nice back story, amazing lust fest in Vegas, and what? No surprise, no indication of future, no wrap-up? The grammar, spelling, syntax, & transitions seemed good, but I thought that the end leaves us hanging.
To me, it's not important what further happened. It is simply a story of the experience. Any guy's dream encounter - two hot women and one guy fucking, sucking, etc. I thought it was great. Gave it 5 stars.