All Comments on 'Velour Couch'

Another great story.

I loved everything about this story!!!!!! Its descriptions of the people and places were so vivid i could see the murky color of the apartment walls on the floor of apartment C and Brennan.... I LOVED HIM!!!!! Kudos to you!!!

Makes you think about what furniture goes through. Especially old stuff.

Cool story loosers crashed and burned and nice people had a happy ending.

it's a credit to the writer that i will spend an enjoyable hour or so reading a story about ...... A FUCKING COUCH!

This was fantastic. I couldn't read it the first time, but I did now, and I'm a better person for it. This story followed your style like usual, but this time I have a few things to say that are less flattering than I did for Inferno, which is probably the best story on this site (esp with part 2). Each character had a place and there wasn't a dearth of them; the ones that had growth were right, the ones that didn't fulfilled their role.

It seemed like the story would also be a confidence/stuttering thing, and hinted at it pretty unabashedly, but it never happened, and it was disappointing...even though the really good ending wouldn't have happened quite the same way without it. The story drifted a bit from the premise, but that was ok...although I sort of kept waiting for it to progress on the couch past being shit, pissed, and watered on. It really got shit on the last time around. Although, the trip was fun, and funny.

The romance was appreciated.

Ok, the ending, the final ending, where the narrator died with the couch, was good. I just wish it was a bit more dramatized, I'm sure you could stretch out the final moments into their reality and further without much effort on your part.

Still, I thought this was great and gave it five asterisks and a favorite. Thanks for telling where you got your inspiration.......which makes me wonder just a bit where you got yours for other stories.

Very good story. Keep it up

What a great, imaginative story.