All Comments on 'Velvet'

Where can I get a white box for me and my hubby???? That was great :-)

Another sexy piece from the great Fizz! Sensuous and steamy, beautifully built up, excellent descriptive writing.

a fantastic fantasy! In know someone who would love this and immediately pictured it happening! This girl knows how to write in a way that keeps you hooked on every word, almost feeling the feelings...guys you are lucky if get our ideas from here! M

Nice story full of invention and a sense of actually being there. The seemingly trivial observations about the movements of the bed and so on give the tale a truth sadly lacking in much erotica.

I loved the descriptions, and the pacing made me feel I was actually there, watching.

Splendidly written, Fizz. I had no idea you had such a wonderful way with words. Hope to read more.

Warwolf