All Comments on 'Vengeful Storm Ch. 02'

You are fleshing the characters out at a nice pace. The plot is really engaging and the voices of the characters work well with the setting and backdrop you have created. I look forward to chapter 3

This first two chapters are definitely making for a good story. You have my attention. (While you're re-posting and hopefully, doing some editing, be reminded that "loose" and "lose" are not the same word.)

-- KK in Texas

Great plot! And I'm already rooting for those girls and majorly repulsed by the Ubel