All Comments on 'Venom Ch. 01'

I just loved the first half of your story.It was so erotic ,so perfect.

When the 'she he demon' apeared ,it ruined the fun for the men in the inn and mine too.

Just when everyone ,me included, was so so hot ,along came the ice cold shower !Please don't do that again ! But I forgive you so

five stars ,and can't wait for the next chapter.Thank you.

In erotic horror I want monsters. Was glad at the turn the story took. But I do agree w/ him that I am also looking forward to the next chapter.

The horror was shy but that is really my worst complaint! I am excited to read the rest of the story. I wish there were more characters so far but that is something that may be fixed very soon! I love it though so keep on writing and I'll keep reading!

I need more!!!

Very much like Lovecraft, indeed. One of my favorite authors.

Sorry, last post was meant for another story