All Comments on 'Veronica & Adam's Adventures Ch. 01'

by Lady Charlotte

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very Nice

I think you should write more stories likes this if you need any help just ask i would love to add a male perspective :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very hot

great story, made me so hot reading it, cant wait for more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
lucky Adam

I wish i was Adam so you could fuck me like a bitch. where is ch 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
foreplay

Every woman wants some foreplay unless its a quicky intentionally. There could have been a bit more lead up like fingering or rimming. I get the dominance line that is coming out of the author though.

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