All Comments on 'Veronica Ch. 02'

all I can say it was written good, I have not read the 1st part because I am not into these types of stories, I read this part just to find out what the story line was about

Nice mix of fantasy and reality. I like that she finds herself absentmindedly sketching and painting erotic scenes. Nice way to reveal those inner desires. I look forward to chapter 3.

The first two chapters were a good read. I am enjoying your character building and look forward to seeing more!

As a Leatherman, I have mentored many folks over the years and am happy that you have taken this approach to your story. It is a good read and I am looking forward to seeing more of it.

I am also extremely pleased that no men have been introduced and hope that continues.

Ed

I love this. I have a mentor only online right now, but I definitely see similarities between how she communicates with me, and how Samantha and Veronica communicate. It makes me feel more comfortable, actually, and is allowing me the language to reach out to my mentor. Thank you and I hope you continue.

Well written and a good account of how a bdsm relationship should be. Nice build up, uncertainty, nervousness and hope along with self discovery and arousal. Good interaction but now needs more characterization and perhaps a little plot twist.

I enjoy a good tale with a happy ending but I feel this needs a little drama on the way, From deceit or rejection to acceptance and surrender. It's up to you, you're the author, takes your choice., Make us feel for the characters.

Five stars so far. Thanks.

I am glad/surprised with this erotic journey you are leading us on by not going strait to the restraints and sex . as with any relationship to last you must have foreplay before delving into to sex . any long term relationship must have that and maybe miss veronica had one,in the past where that was left out and does not want to make the same mistakes with her sub(s). as a good domme has felt what implements that are used feel like

with the face to face meeting with Miss Veronica maybe needs to take her art work with her and give to Miss Veronica to help with insight to Samantha's erotic dreams/fantasies

a sub in private does not necessarily mean sub outside getting runover by everybody

looking forward to many chapters to this journey they about to encounter upon