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talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowalmost 11 years ago
Excellent story. Minor issues.

An "A" submission. Only needed an editor to catch little things like robe instead of rode to make it an A+.

Remember: spellcheck doesn't know if the correctly spelled word is USED properly in the sentence. A skilled human editor, other than the author, is a must. The writer works on their story until they don't really "see" the actual words any more, just what they meant to say.

oprixoprixover 7 years ago
His massage!

If his hand was so badly cut didn't Veronica consider that fact before she asked him for a massage? Huh?

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My name is Mr. Neb and have been active here almost from the very beginning of Literotica. I post occasionally on the bulletin board but mostly I am here for the stories. I write them and read them. I must admit that most written erotica as well as films and videos aren’t v...