by jackredd
can't really say it was good or bad until you post a second chapter or two. a story is only good if properly finished and this is far from finished.
A great story... rough sex between a bro and sis. It was a little fast, but rough sex is like that sometimes. I hope that they can get together again, as bro/sis fuckers. I am sure the captain is going to need some stress relief again in the form of his hard cock down her throat until she gets air or dies. Her ass and cunt are going to need spanking and filling too, before long. Nothing like a freshly spanked cunt.