All Comments on 'Vicarious'

Another chapter please. You're doing a great job.

An interesting twist or two from other body swap stories, because of the interesting starting relationships of your 3 characters.

I've been waiting for a story like this to come on Lit for sooooo long. Keep it up and continue the story please!

Excellent story. Please continue it

Loving it so far, I’m glad you still used their original pronouns after they swapped bodies

The problem with this garbage is that Incest trumps crossdressing/transgender and some of the rest of the stuff just belongs in another category. You tried to put too much stuff into the story and ruined any chance it had of being interesting or good. Badly done.