All Comments on 'Vice Cop Ch. 07'

You describe it as a TV series and it really does read like that, except in fictional/novelized form. You write well, not just the original-style sex scenes but the action and characterization. Here's one little complaint: you tell too much. Instead of narrating, just show us with subtle details, though you're getting better at that too. You've made terrific progress here on Literotica. Keep up the good work. Kudos Miss Hepburn!!

I remain a fan of AudreyHepburn's series, which combines good writing and hot, though infrequent, sex scenes. I prefer erotic writing that sets the sex within a fully developed, imagined world, and that is what she consistently achieves. I always look forward to more and hope that others fall in line behind me.