All Comments on 'Vice Cop Ch. 12'

This is good crime drama/thriller with a touch of adventure and pulp. I really liked it and it's so different from Literotica sex-centered stories. You have a light but literary touch and you take us on such cool adventures. The Black Panthers thing was over-the-top and unrealistic but hey it's FICTION and you kept it grounded in some reality and also didn't make it controversial or R-rated. The violence you write about is mild, like retro 80's TV crime dramas