All Comments on 'Vice Cop Ch. 13'

by AudreyHepburn

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good..

Good story... but there are too many annoying mistakes of interchange of names where its suppose to be Pastor you wrote Doctor,and the same with Hudson and Mason also Lexa and Roxella.

And also in the earlier part you wrote that Leo himself was on the street handing drugs to his prostitute cum dealer(when Hudson arrested him)... how come drug lord hand over drugs himself to a street dealer..this is hightly unlikely n unrealistic, he must a people to do that for him...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Next part

this story hasnt been updated for years, did this guy stopped writing?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hmm

The writer is a female blonde Bimbo...I think she is a high class escort/ prostitute. She got HIV AIDS in 2010 died in 2012.

IntruderjamesIntruderjamesover 5 years ago
End ?

Please finish this novel

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous