All Comments on 'Vice Cream'

by Keroin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent

Not normally a fan of BDSM but I loved the theme of the common ingredient. I'm a bit of an icecream fan myself but I've discovered a few new ways to use it!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Wonderful

Great story that is both sexy and sensual. I loved that it wasn't as hard core as some of the BDSM stories.

terraformterraformabout 15 years ago
Love it.

I love it. So sexy and unique (and appropriately titled!). (PS I was directed here by WriterDom.)

lilyliciouslilyliciousabout 15 years ago
Creatively hot!

I really loved how this was a collection of short stories. Each one was very different, its own flavor. Mango Sorbet was probably my favorite, though I liked Miss Lily in Licorice a lot, for obvious reasons. Keep writing Keroin. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
We all scream for Vice Cream!

Beautifully written and sensual. I can't wait to read more from this author!

ellabeeellabeeabout 15 years ago
Spectacular

This is a superb blend of pleasure and pain. The narrator is lovable from Vanilla. I adored reading this story.

I just wish it had more! The sub in me always wants more, more, and I wish I could experience more of K's sweet releases.

But, alas, that is the entire point.

Well done.

chauderloschauderlosabout 15 years ago
Great story, Keroin

Brilliant style, you really bring your characters to life with few words.

One of the best stories I've read.

KeroinKeroinabout 15 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks so much to everyone who took the time to read and comment on this collection of short stories. Without readers, a writer is nothing.

Cheers - K

Mistress_BelladonnaMistress_Belladonnaabout 15 years ago
Delicious!

Wow, Keroin! What a gem! Ark shared this story and how much he loved Licorice with me, but I'm particularly fond of Coconut! Of course Vanilla, Neopolitan, and Rocky Road are AWESOME flavours as well! "Boring." NOT!!! I love it!

ellabeeellabeeabout 15 years ago
?

How is this not "hot" yet?

TzaraTzaraabout 15 years ago
I thought all of these were excellent.

I especially like that they are for the most part more suggestive than explicit as regards the sex--situational rather than clinical. Makes them even more hot, I think. The only fault is that you left out my favorite flavor: Cappuccino Chip.<p>

Extremely well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Yummy

My taste buds - and a few other bits - have been tickled. Thanks for a delectable dessert, Keroin!

SayyidSayyidover 14 years ago
Great stories!

These are amazing little vignettes combining two of my favourite things: ice cream and kinky sex. As for the question of my favourite flavour, Bubblegum was probably the hottest, but Coconut was just so well-written and romantic. All in all a very good effort.

SimonBrookeSimonBrookeover 14 years ago
Why can't I award a hundred stars?

OK, so I've been babbling about this story all day on the forum. but shit! This is good. Man, this is good. This is so good, so clear, so nuanced, so subtle, so sensitive, so raw, so intense, so real...

I am blown away. I am so blown away. I am in awe. This is writing as writing should be. Go Keroin!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Dont know why

This series does not have a single comment - its superb - fan from India

KeroinKeroinalmost 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks fan from India!

It did actually have other comments but I think Lit has a new format and they are removed over time? In any case, thank you so much for reading and for the lovely comment, as well!

K

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