All Comments on 'Vice Versa'

Sounds like me and my older sister.. we have a sexual relationship and have actually attended a family wedding before.. just me and her.. her husband is a prude and didn't want to go.. so me and Cindy went.. we fucked each other's brains out for the 2 nights e were there, but we had a hotel room.. the only difference is my sister always wore nylons and heels for me when we'd have sex..so after the wedding that night, we got back to our room and she stripped off her dress and bra and all she had on were pantyhose and heels.. fucked her all night and we heard fucking next door too.. she was 25 at the Time and u was 19.. we still have sex to this day and she's divorced..we live together now

Nice twist at the end! I really didn't see that coming. The story was hot throughout, in terms of Dave and Sara's relationship and Zack and Alyssa's implied sibcest, but it felt a bit intrusive or even voyeuristic (not my cup of tea) on Dave and Sara's part until the end. I thought Dave and Sara were going to "out" the siblings, but the real reason for their interest was priceless. Well done!

AB

Very good story, Nice surprise at the end!

The ending was the one I was rooting for. Thank you for writing such a cool romantic (if that's the right word?) story. This is the kind of story I like fun and hot.

Obvious what was going on but it took 4 pages to tell the tale.

4 stars though...

I liked Zack finding Sara in the shower.