All Comments on 'Video of the Week'

loved it a bit long but very good I onced hoped that one of my sisters would do the same but,

A great story...very well written, and believable. Thoroughly enjoyed it. I'll have to make some time to read your other stories...

...but I think it says something about your writing ability (or my interest in 'Incest') in that I'm reading it over AGAIN!

There were some minor errors, but those aside, I really think this was a pretty good story. It had an original idea, and ran with it. I especially like the way you described the cum play in the sex scene, it seems to have been one of your flairs. Keep it up.

This was brilliant story! I will read it again. Good build up, excellent description also on both masturbation and the sex... i wish it will happen to me and my sis! Keep it coming!

A great erotic tale that has excellent narration and continuity without the rushed unbelievible endings that most erotic stories have. This story was written just as it might take place in real life.

i don't usually read stories this long, but i went for it and was VERY glad i did, great job!

Wonderful story, but I'm longing to read about the other "settings" for the videos! Please, don't stop!

Didn't make it to the third page! Very hot story.Paced well and interesting detail.

I don't usually read sibling stories but this was really well done and enjoyable. Really great visual descriptions. ::phew:: rocked my world, it did! M

story was shite

this story made me cum

this story made me cum again and agian

I can't believe there was no fucking. LOL. Otherwise it was really good. Well planned and developed. And very good writing. ^.^ Keep it up. I will definitely read your others.

What is the real name of the website?

a bit boring towards the end

Another fine tale deserving of a top score. Thanks again for all your stories.

Great read. Write some more

I like this story, hot and fun. I wish there was some write up about their first time but it's still very enjoyable as is.

Thank you for sharing.

There's a lot of your stuff I don't like (I can't stand adultery, swinging, or just infidelity, especially when it's made the prime mover of a story) but this is one of the best examples of why I still read your stuff. The only problem is, you end it before they've had sex! The descriptive detail is spectacular (another reason I still read your stuff) but it's just wrong to end a story like this without actual consummation. tldr: please either write a ch 2, or edit this one and extend the ending to include fully detailed sex! pretty please!

she should show her brother what her twat is for, also dad. Also the boy should show his mom what his stiff cock is for.

This was one of the hottest stories I have read on this site. An amazing job of describing the action. Well done!

Would have liked to hear more of Danny’s comments and read more of his reactions.

Please keep going as there are other topics they need to film. Would like to read them.

I’m telling mooooon! Lol

Hot and fun read. Thanks

Pretty good & rated 3 stars from me.

But I'm one of the few who don't get off as much from blow job videos & especially cum eating.

Too bad you never wrote the sequel best brother-sister losing their virginity together video. That would’ve been hot as fuck!!