All Comments on 'Viking Raid'

I liked the story. It needed a bit of editing. Keep writing.

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i hope you will return to this story it is excellent i would like to see where you take it

A minor point, but an important one. This story is set in 813 AD, which would be 20 years after the raid on the Monastary of Lindesfarne - which is commonly held to mark the start of the Viking Age. My point being, it shows the author's attention to detail.