All Comments on 'Viking's Love'

Laundry soap! You owe me laundry soap, electricity and water for a cold shower and washing and drying my now-moist unmentionables! Keep going!

The era of thr Viking invasions and the arrival of the Romani in northern Europe are about 500 years apart.

There's literally NO historical feel about this, it's written in a very contemporary style, lacks any historical accuracy in background, dialogues and overall character behavior... A gypsy in Viking times? And a Viking saying 'there is my good girl'? Seriously?

Overall, I really wonder why you went for a 'historical' setting. You'd have done much better sticking with contemporary and using a 'Viking type' Danish or Swedish male lead.

On top of that, you need an editor for style and content. Pearls like: 'She let him kiss her, but at the same time tried to struggle out from under him' (what exactly is she trying to achieve?) and 'a loud moan erupted from her lips' (vomit can erupt from your mouth, a moan, unlikely so) really make the discerning reader cringe.

I really enjoyed that, although I wish she was more reluctance and defied him more. But I can't wait for more! I hope we can see the next chapter soon!!

I wouldn't mind being fucked by a viking like Jerrik. Compared to spelling/grammar on most sites with free sex stories, you clearly took some time and care with the story. Good writing overall (and even though it's not perfect, neither are people, so don't lose any sleep over it).

You say this is your first story in a while, but I can't find any more stories listed under Snugbug on the site. Are there more of your stories I could read? This made me want to jump someone. Love your writing!

A very enjoyable little read. Would like to have you follow up on these two characters as they get together as a couple.

I got romance and got this twisted shit. He never loved her. She forgives him because he got her off that's physical response not permitting the rape this is not how the real world works.

I enjoy your style and like this story premise a lot! Keep going!

Loved the story, please write more!