All Comments on 'Violating Sandie Ch. 01'

You have laid fantastic geou dwork for this story, please I sincerely hope you continue the tale!

This is the type of story that just gets you thinking. I am looking forward to what is coming next.

Love your stories. Write as many as you can.

This is a really well written story. I hope you decide to write a sequel. I love hearing it from the teacher's point of view and you describe Sandie wonderfully. You make me wish I was in her place~

Aww I'm so glad I can get so many people hot with my stories. I will definitely do a second part as soon as I can. xoxo - Daphne

This story is really well written, moreover the premise is believable. It might be interesting to write a chapter from Sandie's perspective, maybe where she suspects why she's doing these things but doesn't know for sure. Another angle might be for the teacher to hypnotize Sandie and add some of his own programming. But keep it up, your writing ability is terrific and the story line holds all kinds of promise.

Sandie is my kind of girl.

Very nicely done. Well written, well edited, and a believable story. Not much more to say except it was a 5* story.

Because she forgets after each time, this is perfectly set up for a series of increasingly public/humiliating incidents told over multiple chapters. That would be awesome.

Chapter fiveish it comes to light she never was hypnotized and she just confessed how she wants to be or something idk I might be slightly tipsy and reading into that last innuendo too much. Go ahead and ignore me heh

I loved it and I look forward to where you go with all the possibilities. I've been checking in nearly every day to see if the sequel is done.

Wonderful story.

Great story.

I was reading your story in between my reps this morning, and I just had to finish my workout with a masterbation session 😉.

I just loved your story.

I truly wish I could be hypnotized not they would have to but to be under someone’s control is such a freaking turn on❤️❤️

@Wendywants2Btaken - Thanks so much for the nice feedback! If you want a creative twist on the hypnosis concept, read "Mesmerizing Melanie". You'll really enjoy it. :)

Interesting and well written. Good spelling and grammar. Going to have to read more.