All Comments on 'Violet Tears Ch. 02'

Keep them Coming Violet is wonderful and her training is enticing and exciting

I gave this story a 4/5. The *story* and the sex and the excitement deserve a 5, but a lot of words are spelled incorrectly, or misplaced in the story. With a few improvements you could be high on the top lists.

Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more.

This story was well done, but needed more sexual response and action... perhaps more involvement from the Master's own body. Otherwise, great job. Extremely erotic.

The story of Violet is my absolute favorite. It is very well written, even with the few spelling errors and minor mistakes. In fact, I have even used your story to spice things up with my husband.

All it needs is a little proof-reading and maybe drawing things out a bit using description (for example, when he makes her crawl on her hands and knees all the way from the second floor to the second level dungeon below, that could have taken longer and involved a bit more humiliation and discomfort). But that might just be me.

Thanks for writing it!