All Comments on 'Virgin Poker'

Your story sucked except for the ending, the girls were stupid like so many are that chase after rock bands.

Not bad in many ways, but what Cindy experienced was clearly not rape. None of the characters held much appeal. But, the writing was decent and the story was kind of interesting.

What can beat a little circumcision? Loved your story and keep up the great work. The story of the photos seemed for real by the band - to find out what happened 14 years later was way out there. Great reading and loved your style.

And she spent the rest of her life being raped by Big Bertha in prison. Dumb.

There were too many characters that didn't really contribute to the plot and revenge, and some events could've been condensed; even eliminated to keep the story going. I see very good potential in this story by a rewrite.