All Comments on 'Virgin Sacrifice'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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Spell check worked... but wrong words... otherwise enjoyed it

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 8 years ago
Nice little twist at the end

Shame on the author for writing this amoral paen to lust, deception and unethical rhetoric. Worst of all , shame on me for enjoying it.

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 8 years ago
Totally Fun!

Spanking and Good Sex are Always Great Together! Great Writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I would have thought ...

... that Nancy would be ready to hold Clarice down for the fuck, by that time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
the writer Ashson is a poor writer

Ashson story 'sounds' good at first but has broken grammar, misspelled words the story line fades from exciting to boring. It's though process brings the reader from trying to understand the story to confusion thus causing a bad experience with any excitement to deflate and the misspelled words trip the reader along as they try to enjoy a story.

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