All Comments on 'Virgin Sacrifice Ch. 03'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

disappointing

A fairly decent storyline. It would have been nicer if the guy wan't some "random frat idiot". It would have been nice to understand some of the reasons for why or how he was chosen, but this being a jerk-off site, I imagine the author thinks a point was made (NOT).

A nice attempt with good possibilities -all lost

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Yeah right, they were his. Hmmm, hmmm. Only in that twisted world.

Anyway it was a naive and predictable, yeah, silly tale. Try harder. Cheers.

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