All Comments on 'Virgin Whitlwind'

by NormaJane

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LinneaLundinLinneaLundinover 6 years ago
Thank You

A thoroughly touching and lovely story.

MaonaighMaonaighover 6 years ago
Classicists do it in the open

What a lesson in linguistics: Classical Greek, Latin, some Anglo-Saxon and even a punned quotation from 'Hamlet'. A unique and interesting way to drive the story forward. Well done, NormaJane!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Clever

Yes, cunning linguists, both of them!

Trace_WatersTrace_Watersover 6 years ago
Beautifully Different

Enjoyed the story. Sensual, respectful, loving. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Beautiful!

Oh...that was beautiful from start to finish...beautifully written...thank you so, so much!!!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Truly touched my heart.

Very erotic to me but also extremely touching. Words cannot describe the feeling I got from reading it. All people should have such a caring person at least one time in their life.

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Retired but still practising academic, specialist in language and literature. Highly sexed and sexual but not so active in the last few years. Enjoy writing erotic stories, which reveal favourite themes and features.