All Comments on 'Virtual Life Experience Pt. 02'

Bless you for continuing this story, please keep them coming

Typically I am not a sci-fi reader but this is so far a very good story. You stated that this would be three parts. If you can keep the juices going......I see potential for many more parts. Love it tho.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!

Have been really enjoying this story, but what a cliffhanger leave us on. Sincerely hope next chapter is soon!

An old dead civilisation? A spaceship left over? I really hate waiting to see what happens.

5 stars, the whole ASU and off-world interlock is amazing. So creative. I'll read for as long as you write it.

I am so happy you have had time to continue the story. Keep writing and I will keep reading!

reminds me of hunger games

another chapter soon! Eagerly awaited!

Really nice to see new ideas and stories here on the site. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for writing this wonderfully creative story.

First, I would like to thank all of you for reading, voting and commenting on my story. I know you have been waiting for a while for the next installment. I apologize for taking so long, but Part 3 has now been submitted and should go public within a day or two. Contrary to what I said in the Author's note in the beginning of this part, the story does not end in Part 3. I found that I had too much story to tell and will need a Part 4 (at least). I struggled for a while with where to take this story next (yes, it was a cliff hanger for me, too), but now I think I am on a good track.

Can't wait!

Usually finding a good balance between sex and story is difficult for most authors but you did an excellent job with describing scenery and character interaction and intercourse.

Part 3 could offer a way home?

Well done! It's an interesting connection between the two on Antola and the students back on Earth. I agree with another commenter that the sex in the story has been handled nicely and is not been made the primary focus of the story and what's going on.

Daaaaaammmn. Great ending. Interested to see what's going on with the connection. Is Nikki pregnant & Marcella feeling the 1st trimester nausea with her? Are the others experiencing similar symptoms all women?