All Comments on 'Virtually Swapping Ch. 01'

I hate when someone writes a multi-chapter story and only writes one page! I won't rate this until there's more to rate.

But what has been a couple of good marriages is about to come apart and the kids will suffer the consequences.... too bad, but some women can't leave well enough alone starting with Eve

2 friends and one asinine idea...For now just an idea...soon something more and maybe some lives ruined...2* for now

I hate them

stupid cuck shit.

i read this idiot was writing another chapter.

Thank you. Mission accomplished.

1*

not my proudest fap

Light hearted, balanced, could go anywhere. Arousal, 6/10, because it could go anywhere, & sex between good friends is a big turn-on for me.

Yes it's only one page. No it doesn't match your Victorian era ideas of how you feel other people should carry on their sex lives. And I'm pretty sure Chapter 1 at least won't be nominated for the Pulitzer this year. But what part of that did you not know when you started masturbating to a story called "Virtual Swapping?"

Lets give the author credit for coming up with a new twist in a category that has only a few plot lines that get recycled far too many times. I gave it 4 stars, and will look forward to seeing where you go in Part 2. Good effort.

i can't wait to read the next chapter. Question is where is Chapter 4 of Unlocking the Wife Through Hypnosis and the next chapter of this don't keep us waiting.

One of the most stupid fucked up ideas I've ever seen..I'm totally ok with swapping.. but all four should be open..discuss it and reach an agreement acceptable to all... same room together to enjoy and share with your spouse... just plain stupid to try to trick your spouse into something he knows nothing about...not what best friends should be doing... do it honestly or NOT at all

2 stars & I'm being kind. This's chapter 1. WTF happened to 2, or just extend this story? You bring us midway and then drop the story unfinished.