All Comments on 'Visions Unveiled Ch. 00'

by IrishBelle

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southernmisfitsouthernmisfitalmost 11 years ago
Great first chapter

Hope for more soon!!

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelalmost 11 years ago
:)

Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

very cool first chapter cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hooked

Only first chapter, and I am already looking forward to the story's progress. Also, your writing is well done, and everyone can always find areas to improve.

rexbrookdalerexbrookdalealmost 11 years ago
Edit?

Do get an editor. There are a lot of volunteer editors to choose from. Choose one who will proofread your story and edit it for grammar.

panda1870panda1870almost 11 years ago
got me hooked

I like it alot :)

Update fast.... Please :P

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyalmost 11 years ago

Aweskme. Great beginning and I love the way this has played out. Can't wait to read more

sftoyousftoyoualmost 11 years ago
Keep writing

Great start...you have me ready for another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

What a fabulous start!! The baby is obviously his mate, which ties into the vision, and this is very intriguing. Can't wait for more and to see where it goes :)

PallasAthena123PallasAthena123almost 11 years ago
You've got me hooked.

Your writing is strong and you've definitely got my interest.

Please post quickly. Like, at least once a month. Please?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Freaking AWESOME Beginning!

You totally rock! You have true literary prowess!

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