All Comments on 'Visions Unveiled Ch. 02'

keep going. great story,

A little short. Try not to take too long between chapters.

You have a talent for writing and have used it well on the story. Looking forward to more chapters as soon as you can get them up. Please don't take too long. xx

This is a very emotional chapter. You can feel Shane's misery.That must be hell to suffer like that for over thirty years.Looking forward to future chapters to find out how Faline survived.Was it her father who gave her up because he couldn't bear the loss of his wife and couldn't go on without her? How has Shane survived these many years with his nightmares always reminding him of his loss mate? How will Shane and Faline finally meet? Great chapter and it's written well.Anxiously waiting for more.

How you end a chapter annoys the hell out of me! I’m spoiled, I don’t like waiting and suspense is overrated! LOL! The wait is always worth it though because your story kicks SOOOOO much azz!